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I was reviewing what I'd written yesterday and realized, once again, I'd spent two pages telling instead of showing.

This is one of those basic fiction writing rules that doesn't change--99% of the time, showing your story is better than telling your story. So I went back and I re-wrote it, and it is, of course, substantially better.

But dang, this writing stuff's hard work! Why didn't anyone warn me about that?

Comments

Tara Parker said…
I thought it was the other way around? Gah! Back to the beginning... (g)
7:15 AM
Darlene Marshall said…
You are, of course, correct. I can offer two explanations 1. It was April Fool's Day and my subconscious turned it into a joke.

2. I'm a moron who wasn't paying attention.

You pick.

I've since gone back and switched it around, slapping myself upside the head and saying "Show! Don't Tell!"
7:52 AM
Tara Parker said…
LOL - I'd go with number one! (bg) Glad to see I'm not losing my mind (today)!
8:12 AM
MM said…
It's comforting to know that I'm not the only person who edits my work and says, "What was I thinking?"
9:50 AM
Darlene Marshall said…
There are definitely days when I not only feel like we're all bozos on this bus, but that I'm the one driving over the cliff.
10:06 AM
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